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Elsie
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PostSubject: Breathe   Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:33 am

Breathe, breathe, live
Breathe in that vial air
That seems to surround you
Breathe and with it live

Call to that hidden place
From deep within you
Pull on that forbidden power
And breathe till the next day

Don’t break, don’t fall apart
Once you do; everything
Everything will be gone
So breathe and forget about your heart

Doth seen to be departed
Let them go, don’t hold tight
And breathe, breathe
To live another life
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PostSubject: Re: Breathe   Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:59 am

Nice.

It made me feel like I was struggling to breathe myself...

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PostSubject: Re: Breathe   Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:02 am

that was beautiful love
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PostSubject: Re: Breathe   Sat Jun 06, 2009 5:22 pm

wow, I found that to be a very nice poem and I agree with RaynePhoenix, I felt the urge to take a giant breath because I couldn't breathe really well. That is weird how a poem can do that to you. I sometimes feel the pain of people as they (sometimes) say thing that places them as the main character in their poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Breathe   Sat Jun 06, 2009 11:17 pm

Thank you all very much. I am glad you all enjoyed it.
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