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Elsie
Junior
Posts : 26
Joined : 2009-04-19
Vampire :
 |  Subject: I wait  Thu May 07, 2009 4:48 pm | |
| I wait till the day we meet
Till the day we see
I wait for that smile to be real
For that laugh I can hear
My dearly true friends
My one and only love
I wait to see you all
And those bright eyes
And I continue to wait
A year or two
I will wait forever
To hold your hands
I wait for my hearts
For those who have been there
Giving me comfort
I wait till we meet | |
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kaname
Junior
Posts : 32
Joined : 2009-03-26
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Mon May 18, 2009 7:42 am | |
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Elsie
Junior
Posts : 26
Joined : 2009-04-19
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Tue May 19, 2009 7:31 am | |
| *bows* Why thank you! lol | |
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Angelika
Junior
Posts : 62
Joined : 2009-02-25
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Wed May 20, 2009 3:43 pm | |
| Elsie,
That is really good. I hope to see more from you. *smiles* | |
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kaname
Junior
Posts : 32
Joined : 2009-03-26
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Wed May 20, 2009 3:46 pm | |
| long time lo... i mean angelika
she is a great poet
i also wish to see more of you | |
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Angelika
Junior
Posts : 62
Joined : 2009-02-25
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Wed May 20, 2009 3:48 pm | |
| She is a very good poet. I look forward to more of her work.
What do you mean you want to see more of me? Send the reply to my PM box please. | |
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BloodRayne
Newbie
Posts : 8
Joined : 2009-02-27
| | Subject: Re: I wait Sat May 30, 2009 11:29 pm | |
| Wow, that was a really good poem. I enjoyed it, can't wait for more. | |
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Elsie
Junior
Posts : 26
Joined : 2009-04-19
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:27 am | |
| Thank you! I'm glad you all liked it! | |
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RaynePhoenix
Temp. Admin
Posts : 37
Joined : 2009-05-24
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:57 am | |
| Yes, I must say this is a lovely poem. Well done and I'm sure it helps to capture the emotions of many friendships and relationships around the world these days. | |
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Elsie
Junior
Posts : 26
Joined : 2009-04-19
Vampire :
| | Subject: Re: I wait Thu Jun 04, 2009 1:42 pm | |
| Thank you! It was what I was going for. | |
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